Esp. when they have impeccable make up! ^^

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hahahaha cool! ^^

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How have you been, Hysteric?

It's nice to see you are still here and all. Sorry for not able to comment nowadays since I am really full of other affairs and stuffs.

Since this is placed as "Advanced Critique Encouraged", I am gonna offer some of my advice. It may not help much. But I will try my best.

Here goes.

Okay, first of all...your left hand. Pay a close attention to what kind of angle you want that hand to be in your mind. Since I cannot view a bigger size of this image, I cannot really tell the exact flawed proportion of that hand.

Here's what I see. Her (oops, I mean his) left hand has 4 instead of 5 fingers. But if you are intending to make it that way, I understand, the front part of her hand doesn't seemed to flow naturally like how we real humans used to see. This may sound a bit odd, but from what I see, it's as if the last finger was placed in a position instead of flowing naturally. Other than that, the arm still looks fine and all.

OK, here goes the second part. Even the skinniest looking bishie will have at least a bit of a hip shown in his figure anatomy.

I may sound weird, but I can't seem to locate the spot of his hips. =x

Maybe if you widen just a little bit of his upper legs' width, this may turn out to be an even prettier boy you may expect.

The designs are...okay in my bishounen Book.

I actually like how you do the stocking part and his neck bracelet with a chain attached to his umm...ring?? =x

Anyway, this is all of the critique I can give you.

Nothing too problematic, just a slight disproportionation here and there with your pretty boy. Other than that, this one looks pretty decent.

If I am to give a score for this. It deserves 7.5 out of 10, to be honest. This is good, but can be done better.

Keep up your good work.

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Thanks so much for all the critique, I really appreciate it. <3 Glad to hear from you again!! (And thanks for noticing the choker's chained to his ring! X3 I love that part.)

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Just doing what I feel like it

Sigh, it's been like so freaking long since I upload anything. :/

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yeah i know. o_o you gotta get on that!!

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Great job 8D

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Not bad.

But you can work on the anatomy of the figure a little bit more.